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Putting a Book’s Pieces Together

by Dorothy Winsor

Book ideas don’t always (often? ever?) leap into a writer’s mind full-blown. Sometimes disparate bits of a book have to be assembled like the parts of a stained-glass window. The idea for my new book, Glass Girl, came together in three pieces.

Piece One: A Factory Run by Women

The first inkling of this book came from a story on NPR. In a factory somewhere in Latin America, the workers (all women) protested when the owner cut their wages. In answer, he flung the key on the floor and told them they should pick it up and see if they could do better. So, they did. When they made the factory profitable, he, of course, wanted it back.

I was immediately captivated by the idea of the feminine world inside the factory, and it’s always satisfying to see the underdog triumph. It was a beginning I could work with.

But I write traditional fantasy set in a pre-industrial world. In that kind of setting, most work was done in people’s homes. So, what could I use for my factory? At that point, I remembered a long-ago trip to the island of Murano in the Venice lagoon. Murano has been known for its marvelous glass for centuries. Glass making was so important to the city that glass makers were rewarded with high social status. Less happily, they were forbidden to leave. I borrowed both those ideas for Glass Girl. More important for the first piece of my idea, glass making requires furnaces and big equipment. That is, it requires a factory. Voila!

Piece Two: A Dragon!

So, the book is set among all women crafters in a glass making factory on an island. As the island took shape in my mind, though, I realized I was picturing it as volcanic. The volcano had been dormant as long as people could remember, so what did my characters think was the source of the occasional wisps of smoke from the mountain top? Maybe I’d been watching too much “Game of Thrones,” but I decided they believe it’s a sleeping dragon. Everything should matter in a book, though, so I didn’t want to just toss in a random dragon. As I thought about that, I realized I could use dragons in a way I hadn’t seen before.

The sleeping dragon could be a visionary who worked through shared dreams. My characters could be artists in glass whose work was inspired by the dragon, meaning it was sacred. This link mattered because it gave a whole new significance to the struggle to save the factory from a feckless owner.

Piece Three: A Murder

At that point, I had a glassworks engaged in dragon-inspired art and a struggle to save it. Sadly, I concluded that wasn’t compelling enough to shape a whole book. What to do? There used to be a literary agent—Miss Snark–on line who gave writing advice. When a story dragged, Miss Snark would urge: “Kill someone! Set someone’s hair on fire!”

I chose the former option. I killed the central character’s mother, who is also the glassworks craft mistress. Well, I didn’t, but someone did, and seventeen-year-old Emlin decides to find out who it was.

Weight is given to her search by her grief, but also by the fact that since her mother was craft mistress, her murder offended the dragon. It was sacrilege.

The Pieces Assembled

So my story about women winning control of a factory had become about women making glass inspired by a dragon. Their art and their connection to the dragon are so important that the murder of the craft mistress threatens the social order. All that added up an idea for Glass Girl in which everything fit together and each piece added to the others like tessera, creating a story that was dramatically different from any of the original ideas.

Between learning about medieval glass making, writing about a dragon, and plotting a murder, I had a lot of fun writing this book. A book idea doesn’t always leap into the writer’s mind full blown. Sometimes the pieces have to be assembled.

Glass Girl is out May 6, the same day as the coronation. It’ll be House of Windsor vs. House of Winsor. Choose wisely. 😊

 

Amazon   https://www.amazon.com/Glass-Girl-Dorothy-Winsor-ebook/dp/B0C3T2Y961/

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Every Month is Poetry Month at BWW

Poet M. Harlene Henry

M. Harlene Henry

April is designated as poetry month but at the Barrington Writers Workshop every month is poetry month. In this post, M. Harlene Henry shares a poem of spring. For the past ten years her focus has been on writing Haiku, Tanka and Free Verse compositions. She says: “BWW is the oasis of support, encouragement and welcoming camaraderie that I’ve been searching for.”

 

 

GENTEEL SPRING

April 2023

 

the earth

splits asunder

 

our planet exhales

 

sprouts strain toward

spring’s beaming sun

brighter by orders of

magnitude than winter’s

low-watt glower

 

lustful lively critters

careen up down across

mulchy marshy meadows

daringly dart across

gardeners’ Crocs squelching

in soggy garden beds

 

where staid storm

windows stood guard

screens wave greetings to

whitecapped ice free lake

 

the senses reel

 

birdsong trills thrill

unmuffed ears on an

operatic scale

 

sunglasses shield winter’s

 squinty snowblind eyes

from spring’s dazzling

phosphorescent

purple hyacinths

 

lilacs’ aromas lure

those indoors outdoors

 

lapping tongues hail the rain

quit cursing the hail

 

fingers twitch to dig

deep deeper into

mother earth’s mass

 

genteel spring?

hardly

Let’s Celebrate 45 Years of BWW!

The Barrington Writers’ Workshop will be celebrating 45 years of creative community on June 17, 2023 beginning on the first floor of the White House in Barrington. Here’s what’s being planned for this fun and unforgettable event. Doors will open for BWW members and their ticketed guests at 1:00pm. BWW President Bev Ottaviano will give opening remarks at 1:30 followed with a champagne toast and appetizers. Barrington Village President Karen Darch will read a proclamation at 2:00pm honoring BWW’s history and ongoing influence in the village. This event is being held in collaboration with the Barrington Cultural Commission. Thank you, BCC.

At 2:30pm doors will open to public ticket holders for The Writing Life event to be held on the third floor of the White House. This portion of the BWW celebration will feature a panel discussion with distinguished authors and professors Vu Tran (University of Chicago), Rachel DeWoskin (University of Chicago) and Thomas Bradshaw (Northwestern University). The creative spirit in everyone will be inspired by topics including how a writer’s life constantly and unexpectedly dictates their artistic decisions, ways to be creatively brave and the role of the writer in today’s world.

Vu Tran

Vu Tran’s books include the Dragonfish and forthcoming novel, Your Origins. He teaches English and Creative Writing at the University of Chicago, where he is an Associate Professor of Practice in the Arts.

 

Author Rachel DeWoskin

Rachel DeWoskin

Rachel DeWoskin’s is a poet, former actor and author of Someday We Will Fly and Foreign Babes in Beijing. Three of her books are being developed for television. She is on the core creative writing faculty at the University of Chicago.

 

Playwright Thomas Bradshaw

Thomas Bradshaw

Thomas Bradshaw is a playwright, Guggenheim Fellowship recipient and professor in the MFA in Writing for the Screen and Stage program at Northwestern University. In addition to his several produced plays he served as a Consulting Producer on the Emmy and Peabody award winning Netflix mini-series When They See Us. He has had development deals with HBO/HARPO and FX/PLAN B, among others.

At 3:00pm the panel presentation will begin with a welcome and introductions by Rollin Potter, director of the Barrington Cultural Commission. A Question-and-Answer period will follow the presentation.

At the conclusion of the Q & A session guests will return to the first floor for a book sale and signing that will feature event speakers and BWW authors. A cash bar will be open until closing at 5:30pm.

For more information you may contact Bev Ottaviano or Mary Klest. There is no cost to BWW members. To purchase tickets for guests please visit The White House Events page at https://www.barringtonswhitehouse.com/events/ or call (224) 512-4066. Students 18 and under are FREE with paid adult admission. The White House is located at 145 West Main St in Barrington.

Enjoy the day!

 

Writing is an Active Pursuit

Writer Sheila Valesano

Writer Sheila Valesano

What did you accomplish in 2022 as a writer? What do you hope to achieve in 2023? Writing is an active pursuit, so this month we’re talking with BWW member Sheila Valesano, fiction writer, poet, screenwriter and all-around go-getter when it comes to writing.

What writer-focused events and activities did you attend or pursue last year?

In 2022, my screenplays, poetry and short stories were submitted to a number of groups. Here is a sampling:

  • Chicken Soup for the Soul – Lessons Learned from My Cat. I am a contributing writer, Meow Visits the Vet.
  • Barrington Writer’s Workshop – Actor’s performed my short screenplay, Unraveled.
  • NYC Midnight Rhyming Story Challenge – Alareen
  • Winning Writer’s Tom Howard/Margaret Reid Poetry Contest – The Mariner’s Daughter (Results pending – April 2023)
  • CINEQUEST Competition – BESSIE: Soul of a Pilot (Results pending – February 2023)

Why did you choose these venues?

In searching for the right place to submit my work, it’s important for me to find compatibility between my work and where I’m submitting. I want my work to resonate with readers. When the matchup is in alignment, it’s mutually rewarding. For example, my poems tend to be lengthy and rhyme. I look for places to submit that specifically state they are looking for rhyming poetry.

Did you have a favorite event?

It’s hard to choose just one. I am an alum of the Sundance Screenwriter’s Retreat in Utah’s Wasatch Range. The sessions led by Dave Trottier, author of The Screenwriter’s Bible, offer insightful script analysis. The Sundance Mountain Resort purchased and reimagined by Robert Redford, actor, producer, environmental activist and Sundance Film Festival Founder, offers a perfect serene space for screenwriters, like myself. We gather for inspiration, study, critiques, and relaxation. It’s great to have the synergy of a supportive group of writers. Upon meeting Robert Redford, I came to understand how a place can be a character.

My favorite writing contest is the NYC Midnight Screenwriting Competition. I love a challenge and this one is intense. There are three rounds with approximately 10,000 competitors from around the world. For each round, at midnight, competitors receive a deadline, a genre, a subject, and a character.  An original story must be written using those criteria. Deadlines are shortened for each round. As a finalist in screenwriting competitions, I’ve learned a lot from critiques provided by producers and directors. Their feedback taught me to compress my stories.

How do you find out about events for writers?

Information is available through writing organizations, writers, Internet, and books specializing in the craft of writing. I found my mentor at a workshop he taught at Columbia College in Chicago. He is an award-winning Hollywood screenwriter helping me reach my goals.

Tell me about the rhyming fairy tale contest you entered and why.

NYC Midnight offered a three round rhyming story challenge. The first-round criteria gave contestants eight days to write six hundred words or less. My assigned criteria included genre: fairytale, theme: defection, emotion: perplexed. I wrote Alareen, a 597- word fairytale poem that told the story of a young woman who witnesses her village’s mistreatment of a traveler, ensuing punishment, remorse, and restoration. Although the poem did not progress to round two, I received helpful feedback from the judges. Now that the contest restrictions no longer apply, I am free to expand the poem to develop the characters more fully.

What have you learned by putting yourself and your writing out there?

I’ve learned to cheerfully seek feedback for my work. It’s important to hear from people who are writers and people who are not. Both perspectives are helpful.

What will you be doing in 2023?

My plans include promoting the book, Chicken Soup for the Soul: Lessons Learned from My Cat. It launches February 14, 2023. I am pitching my screenplay, Bessie: Soul of a Pilot to producers. Additionally, I’m planning a few personal retreats for novel and poetry writing.

Editor’s Note: If you know of any upcoming events, contests or workshops for writers that you’d like to share please put them in the comment box below.

Trudy Kleckner Shares Thoughts on Writing Poetry

Poet Trudy KlecknerTrudy Kleckner was recently featured in the Arts & Culture section of Quintessential Barrington magazine where she shared some thoughts on writing poetry that we think are worth sharing here. When asked how she turns an ordinary event like visiting a bakery into art she responded: “The poet’s job is to tell a story that moves people. It asks the reader to notice something.” Here’s her poem that accompanied the article.

In The Bakery

the air smelled of butter and sugar and fresh baked bread

a stranger stood ahead of me in line

brown hair sprinkled with grey and smiling eyes

she ordered six scones

      i asked the baker for three

was told they were out

the woman turned and offered to share

oh no i replied

i will make another choice

i did not know her

name or age

but i knew she was kind

i did not know where she was born

or where she lived

but i knew she was kind

i did not know her religion

or her political preferences

but i knew she was kind

in this world

filled with meanness    violence    division

she gave me what i yearn for

more than scones

she offered kindness

We noticed. The poem’s story lifted us. When asked what poetry’s super power is Trudy responded: “Brevity. Poetry says a lot with few words.”

Explaining her lack of punctuation in the poem she said: “Know the rules before you break them. For me, the comma and the period interrupt the flow. Gradually I eliminated punctuation all together. I use line breaks and spaces for a pause.”

The article included some of her thoughtful tips on how to write poetry.

  • Pay attention. What moves you? You can often feel it in your body. It lingers in your mind.
  • Embrace silence. This let you hear an idea inside your head or in your environment. Write it down to anchor it.
  • Let the idea sit for a while until it starts telling you more.
  • Write it out in longhand on paper until you think you’ve got it. Then move it to a computer and edit.
  • Don’t tell the whole story. Let the reader fill in the blanks in their own way.

When asked about the impact poetry might have if read or written by people everyday she said people would be:  “Kinder. More thoughtful. Curious. More open to one’s self and others.” We agree!

Trudy Kleckner’s third book of poetry Bring Light is in the process of being published and will be available soon.

 

How to Get Book Reviews

review booksBook reviews are an important tool for authors to promote their books. Getting reviews should be a part of any author’s marketing plan. Including an “Ask” can be as simple as a personal conversation, an email, a release announcement on social media, or after a book signing, interview, or speech an author gives. There is always the Internet. A search for “How to get a book review” may show drop down search subjects that include “…By the Guardian, On Goodreads, By Publishers Weekly, On Amazon, From the New York Times” etc. It’s worth spending the time to learn what works best for you. How do BWW members get their books reviewed? Here are some answers from our authors.

Lance Erlick, author of the Android Chronicles series, with Emergent released in 2019, said: “This book (and series) was traditionally published through Kensington. They hit their own channels and paid for NetGalley, which provided a number of the reviews. I also reached out to people who had reviewed my prior books and some of them reviewed for me.” Here are two of the reviews he received for Emergent:

“Near future sci-fi writing at its very best.” Jon Land, USA Today–bestselling author

“Erlick ramps up the tension and action.” —Publishers Weekly

Note: NetGalley is described on its website as helping “publishers and authors promote digital review copies to book advocates and industry professionals.”

Dorothy Windsor’s books are traditionally published as well but she also does some of her own leg work to get reviews: “I told everyone I knew about the book, and posted about it on twitter, Facebook, and Instagram.” Her publisher sent eBooks to lots of book bloggers. Here are two reviews she received on Amazon for her most recent book The Trickster published in 2021.

“The medieval setting with a touch of magic provides a great place for Dilly and Fitch to work out what it means to fit in and belong when family doesn’t provide the love they need.”  – Windy City Reviews

“A less intense Game of Thrones meets Pirates of the Caribbean.” — Goodreads Reviewer

When asked what she does with the reviews Dorothy said: “Once I receive reviews, I quote from them on social media with a sell link for the book.”

Sharon Shea Bossard, author of Finding My Irish and Finding Your Chicago Irish, says: “I just ask. I go to all the Irish authors. It’s a community.” She interacts with this community through conversations, emails, and Facebook. When she receives reviews, she may add select quotes on the front and back cover of the book. Her most recent book, Veil of Silence: An Irish Memoir was published in 2020 with a review quote by Emmy Award winning journalist and NBC-TV correspondent Mike Leonard on the front cover.

“A fearless, splendidly written account of a flawed, Chicago-based family, rich in true-life observational detail and redemptive inspiration,” he wrote.

Toni Louise Diol adheres to the just ask idea as well. She said, “An online poetry magazine published several poems and had very nice comments to make when she accepted them.  I asked her if she would write a review for my first poetry book. She was kind and did.”

Being strategic can work. One member said: “Those who plan to publish should consider building goodwill by reviewing other authors long before their book is published. Folks will be more inclined to review a book for a colleague who’s previously reviewed his/her book.” BWW members are colleagues who can reach out to each other for reviews. “We have a few terrific members who write reviews. I’m grateful for any support,” said one BWW member. But that same person went on to say it’s frustrating when colleagues don’t follow through. In other words, don’t lead an author on. If you can write a review, do it.  If you can’t, just tell him or her so. In addition to writing reviews there are many ways members can support each other including liking and sharing posts on social media platforms and showing up at events.

As our authors have shown, they’ve developed multiple ways for getting reviews and using those reviews to promote their books.

 

Janet Souter Co-authors Book on Post WWII Campaign to Unite Americans

Author Janet SouterJanet Souter began writing short stories and eventually joined her husband in writing traditionally published histories, biographies, and fine arts books. Her career includes eight years at the Daily Herald newspapers where she served as a community news coordinator, a weekly columnist and feature writer. She co-authored the recently published book “Selling Americans on America” with her husband Gerry Souter.

How did the writing of this book come about?

In 2015, we were hunting around for another writing project to pitch, so I thumbed through a book titled “The Columbia Chronicles of American Life 1910-1992”. I decided to check out the WWII post-war years, because it was a period we didn’t know a lot about. I found an item about the 1947 Freedom Train and how it traveled the country with original historical documents. We discovered there weren’t any books about it. From then on, we were hooked.

What did you find to be the best resources for your research?

A paper titled “Freedom Train: Citizenship and Postwar Political Culture”; several newspaper articles of the time, and references in books about the postwar period were valuable resources. Also, we found collateral material in the McLean County History Museum in Bloomington, IL. We couldn’t find anyone who had visited it, but one or two people had family photos taken with it.

What fascinated you about the book’s subject?

For me, it was the way that every town—over 300 of them—enthusiastically welcomed the train. They celebrated it with parades and pageantry during “Rededication Week” prior to the train’s arrival. Townspeople offered their services to the train’s staff, especially to the Marines who guarded it. I don’t know if there would be that much dedication today.

Will you describe some of the strife you discovered during the years 1947 to 1949 when the Freedom Train was crossing the U.S.?

Most of all, there was tremendous labor unrest. In 1946 alone and into 1947 there were more walkouts than at any other time in our history. President Truman wanted to continue the rationing that had been going on during war time. There was a housing shortage, coupled with inflation. People were tired; they wanted the good life.

The Freedom Train was privately funded by the advertising industry, civic groups, entertainers, and business leaders. It was also apolitical. How did you decipher their motivation and cooperation?

In addition to what I mentioned above, I believe there was an undercurrent of fear of “creeping socialism” or Communist infiltration. The people that made up the American Heritage Foundation (a different group than the AH today) wanted to re-ignite the nation’s patriotism so that “foreign ideologies” wouldn’t take hold. They saw the Freedom Train as the perfect messenger, believing “you can sell ideas as well as merchandise.”

Does writing now impact how you wrote about then?

Every book is different and has its own voice. For this book, we wanted to tell how the people were impacted by seeing the original documents that showed our fight to achieve and hold onto our rights and liberties.

Why was it important to include little-known historical facts in the book?  

As always, we didn’t want to make this book a dull relating of facts. It is important for the reader to know the mindset of the period. We tried to tell some of that through particular incidents: Brooklyn teen-age girls “kissing” the train, leaving lipstick smudges on it. A woman who visited the train was heard commenting, “I bet the damn Russians don’t have anything like this.”

Have you seen any of the original documents, artifacts, or memorabilia that were on the train?

I recall seeing the Declaration of Independence and possibly the Constitution on a class trip to Washington when I was in high school. It is impressive to view a piece of paper that was touched by our Founding Fathers centuries ago.

Why did you decide to draw comparisons of then to now in the book?

It was a natural. In the 1940s people were unhappy with the way the country was going at the time, but they were worn out from all they endured through the Depression and the war. Today the unhappiness is divided along political lines. No one wants the divisiveness, but neither party or philosophy wants to meet the other halfway.

After writing the book, do you feel hopeful for America’s future?

I always feel hopeful for the future. In the past I’ve seen the pendulum swing the other way when situations become too extreme, which they certainly are today. But it will take several years, I think.

You have written nonfiction and fiction in many genres. Do you have a favorite?

For me, I especially like anything to do with American history.

What do you like most about traditional publishing?

We get paid upfront, either through an advance against royalties or work-for-higher. Neither pays a lot but we have worked with some wonderful people who recommend us to other publishers. As we all know, the publishing world has changed and we must adjust and re-think the process.

What are you working on now?

We’ve decided to concentrate on fiction, which doesn’t require travel or the need to find images. It can be frustrating, challenging and full of angst, but it can be fun too. I love doing the research.

When Father Becomes a Character

Author Harry Trumfio

Author Harry Trumfio

Harry Trumfio is a former public school superintendent, a private school headmaster, and served as Chairman of the Department of Education at Benedictine University. He is also the father of four children and grandfather to six. In two recently published books he explores and honors the role of fathers.

When you began the story about your father what did you want to prioritize?

Of Saints and Wooden Nickels was the result of many breakfast meetings with my dad as I endeavored to learn more about his early life. I actually incorporated some of what I learned at the eulogy I gave at his funeral. After his death I t reflected up what I had learned and thought his story would make a good book. I wanted to develop his character and the mystery surrounding his family in Italy. I needed to begin with his early life in Chicago and his place in his close-nit family.

How did you get the reader engaged in what your father experienced?

I tried to provide descriptions of characters, places and events and then describe my dad’s reactions and those of the characters involved in the situations. His drive to discover a closely guarded family secret is the moving force behind the story.

Point of view is a primary tool in writing. How did you tackle it in the story?

The story is written in the third person. If I were to do it again, I think I would choose first person.  I believe it would provide a greater exploration of his reactions and feelings at the time of each of the incidents described in the story.

Was it hard to portray struggles when the main character is your father?

Since I had spoken with my dad about the various situations described in the book, I had an idea of their content. Writing dialog to go along with the scenes was a bit of a challenge but since I had a pretty good grasp of my dad’s personality, I think I was able to write a realistic portrayal of the circumstances and encounters throughout his quest.

What resources did you rely on when writing the story?

Of course, my major resource was my remembrances of our breakfast conversations about his early life in Chicago, and his quest to discover the family secret. I also relied on the Internet for descriptions of the ships, locations and conditions in Italy during the time of the story.

What did you find was the best way to keep driving the story forward?

I used the chronology of his venture and the incidents he told me about along the way to keep the story moving forward.

What makes your book “An American Story”?

My dad was a self-made man. The book is a coming-of-age story. I believe his story illustrates that dogged determination growing up, if continued, will lead one to success in later life.

Soon after finishing the story of your father, you published an illustrated children’s book about a father and his two sons. Where did you get the idea for this book?

The happening described in the book is based upon the actual experiences my brother, Dominic and I enjoyed working with my dad making candy and especially his signature frozen confection treats.

What do you hope readers will take away from this book?

The close and loving relationship fathers and sons can engender when they work on activities together.

Did you have children read it before publishing? What was their response?

Response from the illustrator’s child was very positive. Adults that read it, loved it.

How has the community of writers at BWW helped you as an author?

BWW members have been a great help by sharing thoughts and ideas that are useful in improving any work I put forth.

How did you publish the books? Are you happy with the results?

Of Saints and Wooden Nickels was self-published through Book Baby, who also provided editing suggestions. Dad, Our Candy Man was managed by Chris O’Brien at Long Overdue Books. He and his staff were a tremendous aid in moving the story idea to finished illustrated book. I owe a special thanks to Dena Ackerman who provided the wonderful illustrations.

Happy Father’s Day to all dads!

Of Saints and Wooden Nickels book cover   Dad, Our Candy Man

An Unlikely Writer

Today’s interview is with a novice voice who took a bold step into the world of writers to publish a memoir, which goes to prove that anyone can write a memoir.

You decided to write a memoir but you’re a nobody with a seemingly mundane life. Why?

A nobody!? Meeeeoooow! Quite the catty remark from someone looking to me for answers
and inspiration, wouldn’t you agree? Swatting your slight aside, let me just say that most writers know that there are no mundane lives, only poor creatures who plod through a boring
existence without imagination, curiosity, or spunk. Those who settle for skim milk instead
of insisting on cream.

I say “seemingly” because you do come across some challenges, one being orphaned at a young age. How did you get through it?

The cobble-stoned streets of Brussels were a mean but very effective teacher. To survive, I learned not to behave as a victim. Heck, the ordeals I’ve endured could fill one lifetime or even nine. I’m curious by nature and quite fearless. I didn’t do it all alone though. Even a solitary stray like me needs scraps of compassion from time to time. My success and survival depended upon the kindness and aid of an array of acquaintances and strangers.

Who do you find to be the most interesting character in your book?

Your question implies that either I can’t pick myself or I shouldn’t do so. Really, the entire story revolves around me. Who could possibly be more interesting than the hero of the memoir? But if I must choose another character, I’ll say Rex. Why? He’s about as complex as characters come. What we see isn’t what we get. A classic anti-hero with rough edges and a mean streak but also a heart of gold. A bark definitely worse than his bite. Rex is someone who isn’t easy to befriend. But he’s someone, nonetheless, whose friendship is its own reward. Continue reading